Thursday, September 12, 2013

Week 10







The man who has forgotten to be thankful has fallen asleep in life.”   
                                                                                           –Robert Louis Stevenson


 It is week ten, which means of course that we have just one week to completion of the quarter.  Thus far you have been assigned a total of 7 essays;  the in-class final (8) and your project remain (7).

  I can look at drafts today, time permitting, and review the documentation requirements and formatting of the Works Cited page.  Rewrites and any outstanding assignments must be submitted by next week, our last class.

Next week a  "final" of 500 words will assess key composition skills–grammatical sentences, unified and well-developed paragraphs, support for your thesis, and sound use of references.  This final, discussed below, must be done by the end of class next week, and be done in class.

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Essay 8 Assignment:  This last assignment builds on the skill practices and assignment goals of the past semester.  The topic itself is communication, specifically what makes for effective communication and what can impede effective communication.  You are first to read the article posted at Salon.com:  http://www.salon.com/2012/06/03/your_words_matter/    We will discuss the piece after the reading and the various ways you might organize an essay that reports on what its author, Jaime Cone, has to say as regards why "Your Words Matter," as the title of the piece claims.

 In 500 words or so, you are to compose an essay that reports on what the author and her sources emphasize in the article and what your own experience has revealed to you about effective (or ineffective) communication, whether of the oral, written, or non-verbal kind.  Note that Cone is essentially reviewing the work of others, the co-authors of a book called  “Words Can Change Your Brain”  and develops her essay by means of a telephone call with one of the co-authors, Andrew Newberg, M.D., director of research at the Myrna Brind Center of Integrative Medicine at Thomas Jefferson University Hospital and Medical College. "Their book," she writes,  "argues that our minds are hardwired to respond favorably to certain types of speech and negatively to others," and cites "compassionate communication" as a key theme.  The format of the piece makes it easy to scroll to specific questions and ideas exchanged between Cone and Newberg.  

You do not have to summarize the entire contents of the interview.  You do not have to include the Work Cited element at page bottom.  You are asked to give a brief overview and pull what you consider the most interesting points for discussion and personal comment in the course of developing your own essay, and your own opinion on the matter of communication.  So the reading selection should serve as a springboard to an essay about communication.  You are to introduce the textual background appropriately (title, author, date) and quote from it on several occasions in developing your thesis idea.  

Title your  essay.  


Note:  Topical development may involve your telling a story (example: a time when words utterly failed, or a time when someone's words touched you deeply); or it may involve describing your own communication style or habits, verbal and non-verbal, strengths and weaknesses, or perhaps the many ways we have of expressing ourselves and what each reveals–at home, at school, work, etcetera– and the challenge and fun we all have "reading" ourselves and others.

Any questions, call me over. 




Thursday, September 5, 2013

Week 9





  
It is week nine, which means of course that we have just two weeks to completion of the quarter.  Thus far you have been assigned a total of 7 essays; your research essay of 700-750 words (#7) is due next week (or week 11, if you must have extra time).  I will return all the papers submitted last week today.   The field reports (6) are due today.


Next week, or the next, a short essay final of 500 words will assess key composition skills.  The final will be done  during class time.   I here post the URL with source reading: at Salon.com:  http://www.salon.com/2012/06/03/your_words_matter/ 


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Review:

The research process begins with your having identified a topic that intrigues you, and with questions:  the who, what, where, when, and why of any story is a start.   You are to be guided by your questions about the topic and its essential significance.  

Discovery Checklist
  • What recent personal experience or observations–at school, on the job, in the culture at large– raise intriguing questions in your mind?  
  • What stories or events have garnered much attention locally, nationally, or globally that speak to your concerns and interests as a young adult today?
  • What problems confront a particular set of individuals or the world today?   What in terms of media coverage is reported of them?
  • Who are the people making an impact or shaping our perspectives on issues or events?
  • What have you read about recently that seems a subject interesting and important enough to merit closer study and understanding?
Browse the Internet to discover the issues and themes of a subject you find interesting.  Prepare a working list of articles and associated images and voices that speak to your particular questions and concerns.  

Establish your purpose and audience as you consider what you would like your research to accomplish. Your curiosity and interest and focused intent will provide a means for engaging an audience and provide direction to the course of your research work.  In the end, you may find yourself doing one or more of the following in bringing the paper to completion:

  • Introducing readers to an interesting new field of study, a long-standing issue or an emerging issue.
  • Analyzing a situation, event, or issue and identifying its key components and significance.
  • Offering a new perspective on some matter that you have come to understand well.
  • Supporting a position or substantiating a conclusion.
  • Solving a problem or making a decision.
  • Advocating for change.
Generate ideas by or brainstorming the topics and questions that come to mind, and then list those that appear promising leads.  Use the terms and questions to proceed with your search for information and answers.

Identify key words and links to use in your search of the literature available online or in the library.

Survey your resources and identify those that will provide enough ideas, opinions, facts, statistics, and expert testimony to address your needs and purpose in writing the paper.

Keep a detailed list, in MLA format, of the sources you might use in the paper, for all sources cited in the paper will be itemized alphabetically on the Works Cited page of the paper.

Sort the research items in terms of relative strength, timeliness, and specificity.  

Avoid looking for information that only serves to support a preconceived notion.  In so far as possible, examine as many perspectives on your subject as fairness and integrity allow so that your comprehension of the subject and your eventual coverage of it have scope and balance.

Keep copies of the sources used in the research paper, and mark those passages used in direct quotation or summary inclusion.  Plagiarism is to be avoided, and I ask that you submit copies of your sources along with the essay.

Peer Review:  Ask a friend or peer editor to answer questions such as these:

*  What is the research question or thesis point being developed?
*  Do you know which ideas are from the writer and which from the reference sources?  
*  Does the writer use quotations to effectively illustrate or document key supporting evidence?
*  Do you have questions about the sufficiency of evidence or the conclusions drawn from the evidence?
*  How does the essay begin and end?  What attempts have been made to show the interest and    importance of the subject addressed?
*  Has the writer edited sentences for clarity, correct grammar, spelling, capitalization, etc.?


Citing Sources in MLA Style:  Read the following carefully:

To document your research sources, whether from an article in print or online, an encyclopedia or dictionary item, an interview source, a film, photograph, illustration or other visual material– there is a standard means.  The primary reference is the author of the source, whose last name provides the key or first word to an itemized alphabetical list on the last page of the report (called the Works Cited page) that contains the full bibliographic information of all the sources referenced or cited in the text.  An author's name and the title of the work referenced must also appear in the body of the essay.  Thus, any directly quoted, paraphrased or summarized information should be referenced or cited in text and included on the Works Cited page.  The author’s name and the title of the piece should be included in the essay text along with whatever item you have borrowed or used.    Sometimes an article or source may have no author credit; in such instances, use the title as the key term.
  
Checklist:
  • Double-check to that you have acknowledged all material from a source.
  • Identify the author of each source in text or in parentheses following the information item.
  • Use the title as a source reference for works without identified authors.
  • Follow the basic pattern for creating entries on the Works Cited page, and be sure to alphabetize them.

The following URL displays the MLA guidelines and illustrations for integrating sources:

Below, the Works Cited format is illustrated for some commonly used sources:

Individual Author of a Book
Hazzard, Shirley.  The Great Fire.  New York.  Farrar, 2003. Print.

Article from a Printed Magazine
Jenkins, Lee.  “He’s Gotta Play Hurt.”  Sports Illustrated. 26 Oct. 2009:  42-3. Print.

Article from an Online Magazine
Bowden, Mark.  “Jihadists in Paradise.”  The Atlantic.com.  Atlantic Monthly Group, Mar. 2007.  Web. 8 Mar. 2007.

Article from an Online Newspaper
Richmond, Riva.  “Five Ways to Keep Online Criminals at Bay.”  New York Times.  New York Times, 19 May 2010.  Web.  29 May 2010.

Selection from an Online Book
Webster, Augusta.  “Not Love.”  A Book of Rhyme.  London, 1881.  Victorian Women Wrtiers Project. Web. 8 Mar. 2007.
  
Organization Web Page
“Library Statistics.”  American Library Association.  Amer. Lib. Assn.  2010 Web. 26 Feb. 2010.

Film
Lord of the Rings:  The Return of the King.  Dir. Peter Jackson.  New Line Cinema, 2003. Film.

Program on Television or Radio
“The Wounded Platoon.”  Frontline.  PBS.  WGBH, Boston, 18 May 2010.  Television.

Advertisement
Feeding America.  Advertisement.  Time.  21 Dec. 2009:  59.  Print.

Comic or Cartoon
Adams, Scott.  “Dilbert.”  Comic Strip.  Denver Post 1 Mar. 2010:  8C. Print.

Personal, Telephone, or E-mail Interview
Boyd, Dierdra.  Personal Interview. 5 Feb. 2012.


Class Exercise:  read the following article(s) : TBA (handout)

Next:

1.   Summarize the key content of each article and then draw a draft essay with a thesis you can support by means of reference to the two articles.  Quote one key item of fact or information from each in  support of the thesis.  Include the necessary in text source information required by the MLA format, and the source information as it would appear on a Works Cited page.
2.  Compose an informal list of associated topics or key words that come up in this piece. 
3.  Using the topic or key words generated from the reading, find two related articles in a search of the Internet.  Identify by author and title the two or three that appear interesting, and the MLA information for each.
4.  Submit the exercise to me for review.

Thursday, August 29, 2013

Week 8




                                       
                                            Lake Worth Street Painting Festival 2013

Good morning, class.  I hope you enjoyed the week past and have caught up on projects.  In any case, today we will look at the short reports you wrote and the previously assigned field report, or those completed, and the poem "Illumination," by Eric Paul Shaffer.  We will also review the documentation of primary and secondary source material and practice using the format with an in-class exercise, perhaps one that focuses on visual imagery–photography, film, illustration.   The goal is to make you comfortable using various sources to develop an essay theme and thesis point. Before the end of class, we will again discuss requirements of the individual report that will be due week 10. 


A short list of websites featuring topical material and news from a variety of perspectives and in different mediums:

NPR.org (National Public Radio)

huffingtonpost. com

slate.com

salon.com

nytimes.com

thedailybeast.com

Sources covering scientific, environmental, medical, educational, and judicial matters and research can be found through more specific searches of non-profit, education and governmental sites.  The U.S. government, for example, maintains a site on the topic of "bullying" that may help in your research of the topic.


Please consult with me about grades and any missing or late assignments.  As we approach the final weeks of class, I want you to be completely clear about what is due or outstanding.  




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Citing Sources in MLA Style

To document your research sources, whether from an article in print or online, an encyclopedia or dictionary item, an interview source, a film, photograph, illustration or other visual material– there is a standard means.  The primary reference is the author of the source, whose last name provides the key word–the first word– to an itemized alphabetical list on the last page of the report (called the Works Cited page).  The Works Cited page contains the full bibliographic information of all the sources referenced or cited in the text.  Any directly quoted, paraphrased or summarized information should be referenced or cited in text and included on the Works Cited page.  The author’s name and the title of the piece should be included in the essay text along with whatever information item you have borrowed or used.  This in-text reference may appear as a parenthetical citation (i.e. a set of parentheses like the one I am using now) containing the author's last name and perhaps a page number or text title.  Sometimes an article or source may have no author credit; in such instances, use the text title as the key term.  

The following URL displays the MLA guidelines and illustrations for integrating sources:
Checklist:
*Double-check to that you have acknowledged all material from a source.
*Identify the author of each source in text or in parentheses following the information item.
*Use the title as a source reference for works without identified authors.
*Follow the basic pattern for creating entries on the Works Cited page, and be sure to alphabetize them.

The Works Cited format is here illustrated for some commonly used sources:

Individual Author of a Book
Hazzard, Shirley.  The Great Fire.  New York.  Farrar, 2003. Print.

Article from a Printed Magazine
Jenkins, Lee.  “He’s Gotta Play Hurt.”  Sports Illustrated. 26 Oct. 2009:  42-3. Print.

Article from an Online Magazine
Bowden, Mark.  “Jihadists in Paradise.”  The Atlantic.com.  Atlantic Monthly Group, Mar. 2007.  Web. 8 Mar. 2007.

Article from an Online Newspaper
Richmond, Riva.  “Five Ways to Keep Online Criminals at Bay.”  New York Times.  New York Times, 19 May 2010.  Web.  29 May 2010.

Selection from an Online Book
Webster, Augusta.  “Not Love.”  A Book of Rhyme.  London, 1881.  Victorian Women Wrtiers Project. Web. 8 Mar. 2007.
  
Organization Web Page
“Library Statistics.”  American Library Association.  Amer. Lib. Assn.  2010 Web. 26 Feb. 2010.

Film
Lord of the Rings:  The Return of the King.  Dir. Peter Jackson.  New Line Cinema, 2003. Film.

Program on Television or Radio
“The Wounded Platoon.”  Frontline.  PBS.  WGBH, Boston, 18 May 2010.  Television.

Advertisement
Feeding America.  Advertisement.  Time.  21 Dec. 2009:  59.  Print.

Comic or Cartoon
Adams, Scott.  “Dilbert.”  Comic Strip.  Denver Post 1 Mar. 2010:  8C. Print.

Personal, Telephone, or E-mail Interview
Boyd, Dierdra.  Personal Interview. 5 Feb. 2012.

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 Final Project  (#7) :  A short research project  (750 words minimum, with in-text references to sources and a publication source list, i.e. a "Work Cited" list) is due week 10 or 11.  This essay should address some subject about which you can make an arguable claim or assert an opinion that can be supported by the various sources you pull together to develop and prove the claim.  I would like to see you address a topic making news now(the recent news lead)or in the not-too-distant past, just as we did with the topic of domestic cats.  You must include information from at least two different secondary sources (article reports or commentaries by leading authorities, scientific or cultural) that provide clear support for your argument (thesis claim). 

In the humanities, which includes the study of art, film, literature, philosophy, and religion, students often analyze some primary source, a literary work or historical document, a painting, film, or other work of art.  In the social sciences, which include business, economics, education, criminal justice, psychology, sociology,  health studies, researchers study the behavior of individuals and groups, seek to understand and explain causes and trends, suggest appropriate policy responses, and so on.  Whatever the subject you address, again, provide at least two to four sources to help you make your case, such as published articles or book material that provides commentary, history, etc.  

Other sources such as personal experience and eye-witness accounts, documentary photographs available on the web or elsewhere, cartoons, reader responses, information or insights gathered through personal interviews, surveys, etcetera, may also figure in the essay.  You should provide clear summary of context and important details, and direct quotation of experts or authorities whose reports of fact and opinion matter to your argument.  You are to have both in-text references and a Works Cited page, and you are to title and double space the essay.


Thursday, August 22, 2013

Week 7


  Illumination


To begin today we will review the work and page notes of the last few weeks and the assignments due in the coming weeks.  The quarter is fast coming to a close.  Be mindful of the work that must be completed to pass this English class.

A quick recap of recent work:

      Essay 3 (a summary of the posted article).
      Essay 4 (a poetry explication of "Illumination").
      Essay 5 (a short report stemming from the article"Climate Change Will Cause More Energy Breakdowns" published in the NewYork Times) is due today.  I'd like to look at a few, in fact, during class; by means of the shared drive the entire class may profit from the individual work you have composed.
      Essay 6 (a local field reportis due week 9 for presentation.
      Essay 7 (a short report with full MLA documentation) is due week 10, at the start of class.
      Essay 8  (in-class final) will be assigned week 10 and due at the end of class week 10 or 11.

All of the assignments above are geared to writing that takes account of the creative work and research or reporting of others and that requires accuracy in representation and the use of textual evidence in support of claims, the sine qua non of academic writing.



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We experience the world through our senses and mind, reading the meaning of color, shape, sound, texture, form, composition in the images endlessly playing in our perceptual fields.  The images that culture produces–photographs, films, commercials, drawings, paintings, cartoons, logos, graphics, etcetera–these may be “read” and elicit our response just as a written text might.   What can one learn from visual representations?  Can one analyze the particular messages or meaning conveyed, interpret the story told, point or theme illustrated?  Indeed, whether we want to understand the documentary value or the aesthetic appeal of a particular image, or the social, political, or economic interests and attitudes that an image represents, close study of visual representations can be fun and insightful activity.

How do advertisers get us to buy?  What makes a particular photograph resonate?  What storylines or themes implicit in images make us pause?  How to begin identifying or “reading” the source content?
The following guidelines should help you write cogently about visual representations:

Source, Purpose, Audience
*Identify the context of the image(s) or video; that is where and how it has been published and distributed or exhibited.  To what end or purpose was it created, and by whom?
*What audience does the image address or appeal to?  How so?
*What is the most prominent element or figure in the image?  And the primary focal point? 

Objects, Figures, Story
*Identify the important objects and figures of foreground and background, consider the literal and expressive details of each, and their collective arrangement in the composition. 
*What story or event is depicted or implied?
*What mood or emotion or idea(s) are put in motion by the use of light and dark, color, balance or lack thereof, the use of white space, graphic text or other elements, etcetera?

Take Away Meaning
*To the extent the image persuades by feeling, mood, dramatic content, and so on, what is to be learned?
What do the uses of the image suggest about culture, politics, social life, art, history, the human condition?


Essay Practice: We will be writing about a single image or video piece, and its bearing on the larger issue(s) to which it speaks.

Some options we will consider are listed below.   Keep track of titles, authors, photographers, and posting sites so that MLA documentation can be completed.


(1)  The following URL affords a fairly extensive photo archive that we will use for class practice in presenting and interpreting visual images.  You will choose one image for a short work of 350-500 words that describes the image and the idea(s) it serves to illustrate or the questions to which it gives rise, whether social, historical, political, philosophical, aesthetic, technological, existential . . . .  You must have a point to make in addressing the image and support that point by means of reference to the image.  You do not have to be an expert on the subject the image addresses or implies, but you should be able to identify something about its impact and merits to make an interesting short essay.

(2)  Some online periodicals provide a fairly large number of the work of cartoonists, who offer perspectives on matters making the news, in politics, sports, environment, etc.  Choose one from the daily offering or the archives, describe the image and any accompanyng text, the artist or author, and the story, matter, or issue it addresses.  You can google key words associated with the pictured material, and find recent news reports that may enhance your understanding of what is being depicted.  Humor is typically an important element in cartoon work and you may have fun presenting readers the material.  Avoid selecting any piece you do not get.  350-500 words, titled, double-spaced lines.
One site:



You should include references to author or relevant sources in text and at the bottom of the piece in the MLA format.

*  The world of images obviously exceeds the postings above, and if you have some alternative image example, you may elect to work with it.  
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An alternative to this practice involves getting together with one or more classmates to discuss an issue important to you all, airing your thoughts, concerns, and collective knowledge.  As a pair or group, you will google some very narrowly focused area of the subject matter to see what can be learned from recent reports or the opinions expressed by others.   Each of you will write about the issue, incorporating into the paper some of what your classmates have had to say, your own beliefs, and any important items of fact or opinion expressed in news reports.  

Whew!  Sounds difficult, doesn't it?  But it is not, really.   You will hash out the matter between yourselves to determine how you each see a particular issue, its importance today and in the years ahead.   You will have to write down some of the interesting questions and comments generated in your group discussion. Some of these you will use to illustrate the issue and the range of responses it generated in your discussions.  Each of you will write your own paper and in the course of it show what one or more of your classmates had to contribute to the discussion.  You will quote, paraphrase, or summarize briefly their views.  You could even use the question/answer format for part of the piece.  Above all, have some fun and try to learn more about the subject and your classmates' experience.

Listed below are some of the topics I have received in previous quarters:

1.  Threats to the environment, including climate change and pollution.

2.  The weak economy and high rate of unemployment.

3.  The struggle to legitimize gay marriage.

4.  Threats to our food supply and/or what's wrong with the Farm Bill.

5.  The high cost of education today.

6.  The technology race.  Should we spend for 4g phones and all the rest?

7.  Fast food.  The real costs.

8.  The costs of war and militarization.

9.  Culture rot or the dumbing down of society by media.

10. The threat posed by overpopulation.